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To See the Beginning

Kalan shied away from the light, shielding his eyes. He checked his suit making sure it was in perfect condition. He looked over to find his brother, Lucas, doing the same. His routine check finished Kalan looked about him. "We've made it. Good work Lucas."

"Did you ever doubt me, bro?" Lucas said with a laugh.

"Of course not Lucas, you have never given me reason to doubt. We have done something previously thought possible only in science fiction. We have traveled in time!" Kalan's brown hair fell into his face as he looked around.

"Remember Bro, it's more than that, we've traveled to the beginning of time itself!"
My very first deviation. This was my praticing writing short stories. I wanted to see a completed work. Something with a real beginning, middle, and end. Hopefully you'll like it! The full work is on my blog.

But still, please, no stealing or copycatting. I rather like my story as my story not someone elses. All characters and ideas are my own.
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That. Was. AMAZING! I had to go to the blog as soon as I saw this and was not disappointed! Keep it up, Crystal!